[Read Branded Fall of Angels #1] Epub By Keary Taylor
Keary Taylor ☆ 4 Free downloadNd she acts very distant with both of them Hm Jessica Bailey thy name is Mary SueOverall a good idea poorly executed First of all negative stars a shelf created especially for this book because it eft such a bad taste in my mouth that the only stars I can possibly give are those below zero As you might have guessed Branded made me angry and therefore it will be impossible to review this without spoilers However many of the plot is so obvious and unoriginal that the spoilers aren t that substantial Also some explicit anguage will be used because sometimes there is just no better way to express your opinion Note as well that this is a rant disguised as a review so it s ong You have been warnedI considered several times to just DNF this one but a part of me hoped it would get better It did notI originally had this one classified as high hopes but after re reading the blurb I honestly have no idea what gave me that impression I blame the cover because angst ove triangle and insta ove were already pretty much announced It s probably my soft spot for fallen angels retellings although the only decent ones I have read this far are Daughter of Smoke and Bone and Angelfall Edit I can t believe I forgot Unearthly How did that happen I blame you BrandedThe basic set upJessica is a 20 year old runaway who is a housekeeper for an elderly couple She ives next door to Sally Thomas a woman who has been the victim of spousal abuse and spends her days shopping groceries for the two of them When she s not playing the good Samaritan she s a general recluse who only sleeps one night every four days or so In her dreams she s a proxy for a recently deceased person who is now being judged by angels and almost always branded the sign that she s condemned to an afterlife in hell She has the scars to prove it They include the branded X in her neck which always throbs after her nightly adventures and then there is something with her having protruding shoulder wings Some random flashbacks break up the narrative even and then one night yes middle of the night a guy bursts in and takes up residence in the house she s a caretaker for Turns out he s the owners out of this world hotgorgeousdelicious grandson and the owners have died He s
random travelling the to seem interesting and stuff When he conveniently needs to go meet with his The Moretti Marriage lawyer for a week because something is wrong with the willet me think maybe the fact that the grandparents The Dark Duke leftoads of money to a girl that doesn t even work for them now but can still A Measure Of Love (Kincaid Trilogy live in the house becauseogic review by MegslyWarning possible spoilers aheadBranded follows 20 year old Jessica Bailey who is a teenage run away who never sleeps She can usually reach almost 100 hours with no sleep before her body starts caving in on her The reason she doesn t sleep is because she has night terrors extreme night terrors In her dreams she finds herself ocked in a room awaiting trial An angel she calls Adam with gray eyes which is apparently indicative of whether or not they are fallen or not Gray means he s neutral territory retrieves her from her cell and takes her to face a jury of ten five condemned angels and five exalted angels decide her fate If she passes she is thrown upwards into the heavens and if she fails a hot bar of metal shaped ike an X is pressed into the nape I received aCompletely Random Travelling The
copy from Smashwords as a freebie This was an enjoyable read The story was well written andfrom Smashwords as a freebie This was an enjoyable read The story was well written and Also the characters were great I really The Soul Of A Thief liked Jessica and Alex I thought their relationship was perfect Their chemistry was great I thought the ending was great I cannot wait to see how the series unfolds Keary Taylor is now on my favourite authorsist Overall a great read. Ill do anything to be with one of them Even tell him the truth about angels why she never sleeps and the scar on the back of her neck But one of the two has set events into motion what will pull her toward her own judgment and turn her into the object of her greatest fe. ,
D this book on a whim I ove to read the work of Secret Baby, Surprise Parents local authors jumped at the chance to help support aocal up and coming when I saw this book at a bookstore near my office in Seattle I read every day on my way to and from work on public transit and sometimes while reading this book I d almost forget where I was Once I almost missed my stop The story is compelling
the scenery and set building very full without dragging down thescenery and set building very full without dragging down the of the story Jessica often notices the weather and its effects on her surroundings but then Mystify (Mystyx, living in this part of the country it s hard not to notice and the weather plays as big a role in this story as it does in the realives of those of us The New Baby living in the Pacific Northwest There were a few issues with word choice and repetition of descriptions thatent itself to the writing feeling just a Wild Streak little bit amateur but the fact that those issues didn t detract from the story on the whole is testament to great world building and wonderful character development I wanted to know about Alex Why is he so uick to fall inove with Jessica Why did he spend so much time travelingwhat was he running from Why was he so willing to offer up his own salvation but I have a feeling that of him and his background may be coming in the next book I am also hoping that the next book helps make the ending of Branded feel P.I. Daddys Personal Mission (The Coltons of Montana, less clipped short The GoodBranded has a very interesting premise angels are not the glorified beings they re hyped as Instead they are the cause for the main character s torment NeatThe storyine is decent as well It kept me guessing until the end It s not all that predictable except for the romance bit and the author keeps some semblance of suspense up until the very endThe BadFor one thing the ending seems very rushed Taylor manages to cram the entire resolution of the story into pretty much a paragraph Wow That s amazingly badThe other thing is that Keary Taylor is in dire need of an editor The writing is unsophisticated at best with awkwardly stilted sentences and cheesy dialogue There are some typos as well such as tough instead of though and so on Speaking of which the mindless repetition of certain words sometimes though etc made the writing style even clumsierThe kindle edition is also formatted badly I don t know how much of this reflects on Taylor as I ve never published anything for the kindle However it s rather distracting to have random Say Youll Stay And Marry Me line breaks and indentations in the middle of sentences There were a few indescrepencies as well Not huge ones but noticeable after one nightmare Jessica notes that her skin is almost as flawless as an angel s Then Alex walks in and says that sheooks awful and she agrees What I thought her skin was flawless Her father also sends her a Rafaellos Mistress letter in the mail asking where she was as he apparently has no clue where she is If he has no idea what part of the country she s in how did he send theetterThe romance was not fleshed out well at all Paramour Alex Wright is blatantly Keary Taylor s wet dream Mr Right He s gentle and understanding to a fault gorgeous has a good sense of humor filthy rich but doesn t have to work tolerant of Jessica spending time with other gorgeous men adaptable an excellent kisser enad with her single and an excellent cook And is so infatuated that he s willing to The Boleyn King (The Boleyn Trilogy, lay down hisife for Jessica after only knowing her for a few months Wait haven t I read this romance before Oh it s Bella and Edward without the stalking Speaking of which there s no reason given for why Cole and Alex both beautiful wet dream men are so infatuated with Jessica Her awful appearance brought on by a Rascal lack of sleep is mentioned multiple times per chapter she s unbelievably socially awkward and is essentially a hermit Oh Ause of it all Yet she carries the mark of the condemned seared into the back of her neck and hides it and herself away from the worldBut when two men she can't ignore enter herife everything changes including the nightmares The two of them couldn't be different She First off et me say I finishedno devoured the first two books in two days time I was wary to start it I mean bad angels didn t sound awesome to me but I gave it a shot and was not dissapointed The characters were not annoying as I find they are in alot of fantasy novels They were relateable and caring towards one another Their relationship was sweet and believable no patronizing I m not turned on by female roles who are whiny and selfish And the male roles are usually so arrogant but they re hot so it makes up for it or he s broken and she has to fix him Jessica was extrememly What Would You Like? likeable and Alex was divine and they progressed together nicely The bad guy was well written and the situations were easy to understand and believe Jessica and Alex didn t have sex in the book and I was ecstatic about that It s almost impossible any to read paranomal romance novels without it beingittered with sex scenes All in all a good series The end will Narcissus in Chains (Anita Blake, Vampire Hunter, leave you buying the next book immeidately Can t wait for book three and book 2 ending was even seal inducing I friggingove it Can t wait WARNING SPOILERS SLIGHTInitially I was really into this book I Cinderella for a Night (36 Hours, loved Jessica s character The premise intrigued me The writing was decent Then Alex happenedI did notike Alex at all He was too chipper Too eager At Friend Foe least he is in the beginning He and Je So I did enjoy the story in this book but I am not sure Iiked how it was executed The idea was fantastic and very original I am not sure if this was the writer s first book but the flow of the book was off There was so much build up and not enough character development to fill the pages While I The Longevity Diet liked there characters in the book okayI didn t feelike I knew enough about them to Grassroots Innovation love them There was so much room to get you emotionally involved with the characters but since you didn t really know much about them it kept them as strangers With the character development being aittle Bouquet of Flowers in a Vase, by Van Gogh lacking in this book theove story also fell slightly flat It just wasn t believeable enough for me I also had a big problem with the fact that the characters said ya all the time For some reason this bothered me to no end I would actually start
cringe when read it If you read the book I am 100% positive you will know what I mean by that That being said the Architecture and Utopia last 40 or so pages of the book actually almost completely make up for the fact that alot of the book wasacking The villian in the book really begins to blossum as does the main character The emotions that are written towards the end of the book are portrayed so much better than in the beginning Your connection to the characters begins to develop much So because of this I am hopeful that in the next book that strong connection continues and the writer continues to improve and have acutally found myself excited toto cringe when
see where the story goes well i hadwhere the story goes Well I had give my own work 5 stars right Keep an eye out for Forsaken the second book in the Fall of Angels coming this fall Jessica Bailey is tormented Every time she falls asleep her nightmare begins The first chapter got me into reading the book It was different It started where most books end on judgment However after a couple of chapters the story goes downhill FAST The author tends to overelaborate on everything Perfect Cities leaving nothing to the imagination There are a few pages full of just descriptions of surroundings and feelings I gets boring fast when every detail is explained and explored The book feelsike a very Prometheus Wired long prologue That everything could have been explained in 3000 words oress The events are uneventful the villain is easily defeated and ove conuers all yet again But the struggle wasn t clear The message wasn The story and the characters definitely kept me reading I purchase. Alternate editions for this ISBN can be found here ebook here pbk and here ebookJessica's had the nightmares for as ong as she can remember Nightmares of being judged for people who have died of being branded by the angels Her friends and family think she's a crazy bec.